We have been working on creating a strong narrative. It had to be consistent, Believable , descriptive , and a strong structure. We had to be capturing the audience.
Yesterday me and my class room was learning about show not tell. We have to highlight the action words in our story. We had to search up thesaurus on google. We had to pick one of your highlight words that was a weak action word to a Strong action word.
We did it like this:
Here are the weak action sentence:Al gave Miss D a Coffee.
Here is the sentence we changed:Al Awarded Miss D a Delicious Hot Cappuccino.
Here is the link to the thesaurus site in case you need to change some action words.
Click here to Thesaurus site
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