Kia Ora readers,
Today I'm going to be sharing my Writing. This writing is anything we had to choice a topic Adventure scary and other things. I chose scary It was about me and my friends Tori Temera and Huny. We had to add 2 metaphors and other language features.
Here let me explain some of my story. Me and my friends were walking to the mall in the middle of the night I felt something on my leg is was huge and cold. I stopped to look what it was I looked my pupils were getting small and huge, I saw a snake it was small as a snail. I shouted out for my friends help. They turned around to see what had happened they asked what was wrong. I told them there was a snake on my leg they didn't see anything and said theirs nothing on your leg with a confused look.
But let me stop there I might even end up telling you the whole story let me show you my work.
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