Tuesday 15 October 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Well done Malama. Your goal of having your punctuation correct has been achieved in this piece of writing. You have introduced the ideas and then added detail, and it is interesting to the reader. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteWow Malama.It sound like you did lots of interesting things.All I did in the holidays was wash floors,windows and walls.Although on one did I did go and watch my daughter bungy jump at Hanmer.Maybe one day you could teach me how to play 'Monkey'.Do you get to eat lots of bananas? I hope so because I like bananas.
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