Friday, 26 July 2019
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A good recount Malama. It flows nicely, and is interesting to the reader. Well done! Please just check you have capital letters for names of places, days of the week, things and people. Your punctuation otherwise is so much better. You have lots of full stops and new sentences now. Very well done!
ReplyDeletehi Malama I like the part you said fijian vs maori becaause you said about my country
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