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Monday, 22 June 2020

Word of the Week! Sceptical

Kia Ora, Today i'm going to be sharing my Word of The Week with you.

This word of the week is sceptical .I was once sceptical when I told one of my friends that she can't do a backflip. Sceptical also means that is doubtful,  doubtful means that you believe that they can't finish their work in 2 minutes.  Or you don't believe that Diane can do a cartwheel.

Here is my word of the week enjoy.



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Friday, 19 June 2020

Narrative structure

Kia Ora, Today i'm am going to be sharing my narrative structure writing.

We have been doing our Narrative writing we had to make it strong consistent, believable, and descriptive.

This is what you can find on our site.

WEEK 10
We are learning to create a strong narrative.

It needs to be believable. It needs to be descriptive. Remember this week we are adding the details that describe the type of character, setting and complications in your narrative. We are trying to add in all the details that will make your narrative believable. Make your reader believe in your character, love your character and want to be a part of your story with your character.

It needs to be consistent.

We create a strong narrative by following a narrative structure. If we do not use a narrative structure then the 'text' we are creating is not a narrative. Narratives need to include a plot in order fro them to be a narrative.

We had to say who are our characters what time and place did it start from and what is the worst situation in story. The worst part of the story is when the animals are started to get very sick from the virus. Sonic and Tails are disappearing and losing their powers. So they wouldn't exist in the real world the only way they could get out if another person went on the island.

                                             Here is my Narrative Structure writing.
                                 
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Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Math Observation 4

Malo lelei,

Today I'm going to be talking and sharing my math observation with you.

We had to write down what numbers or patterns we can see in this picture. We also had to write down equations or questions of the picture.
Like they had 5 bugs in this photo and they have patterns on their backs. Here are some photos of the bug and here is also my work.

We are continuing to prove our maths thinking and ideas in different ways.
Let's keep proving our thinking by the answering one question in 3 different ways. Remember you are not trying to just get the answer. You are trying to prove your thinking in different ways.
Here is a photo of the same bug

but a different color.                                                              Here is my math observation work.
                                                                                     
                        


         



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Monday, 15 June 2020

Word Of The Week!!! Withdrawn

Kamusta,

Hey readers today I'm going to be sharing my word of the week with you . This word of the week is Withdrawn. Being Withdrawn is like being lonely. I have been lonely when I went to school . One day  I was lonely because I had no friends to talk to or to play with . So that is how I was lonely and what withdrawn means. Here is my word of the week enjoy my writing.




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Monday, 8 June 2020

Word of the Week!!! Cheeky

Malo lelei,


Today I'm going to be sharing my word of the week with you. This word of the week is Cheeky I was once cheeky when I was playing with my friends. We were throwing one of my friends up and we all forgot to catch her so she landed on her bum and we all started laughing.  
Here is my Word Of The Week writing enjoy.




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Thursday, 4 June 2020

Doing a Strong Narrative!!

Talofa readers,

Hi i'm going to be sharing what we have been doing in term 2 for writing. This term we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable, Descriptive, consistent. We can describe the setting and the characters. 

Today we did Sick Sentences. We changed boring sentences to a Strong Descriptive Sentence.

Here are one of the boring sentences.
Anna sat down.
Here is one of my Strong descriptive sentences.
Anna sat down on her knees on the old dusty cold floor.

Also this week we have been writing a story about Anna here is my work.

Here is some of my writing about Anna.

The girl tried to run but she kept ending up on the same spot. The old lady was laughing and said “there was nowhere to go”. The woman's face started to bleed out blood. Her mouth went wide until it fell apart.

I hope you enjoyed reading my blog post please leave and have a beautiful day.




Wednesday, 3 June 2020

Word of the Week!!! Nauseated

Talofa lava

Today i'm going to be sharing my Word of the Week with you.

This Word of the Week is Nauseated what I learned from Nauseated is when you feel sick.
Here is my learning.




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