My Writing

Malo Lelei readers,

Today I am going to be sharing my writing I have been doing this week. We all have been learning about surface features. Surface features are little bits in your writing like punctuation spelling and repeated words. We had to fix our writing if there were words that was repeated the most. Why are we using surface features? Because it makes it easier for people to read and understand. Here is a example: thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed this sentence doesn't have surface features. We also had to fix our writing if too many words were the same.

On our Room 9 site we our teacher put on a link to a story we needed to fix. We make our own copy . We had to read it once and find the end of the sentence. I hope this explains what surface features mean if you have any other questions feel free to comment

 Here is a photo of my writing I have been working on this week. This is not my story I just had to highlight the words that were repeated and fix mistakes in this writing.

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My Writing

 Kia Ora readers,

Today I'm going to be sharing my writing. What we did for writing is that we wrote about a picture. We had to put language features but there also was senses the senses were. Hearing seeing smelling feeling and touch. 

The writing was about.A lady that was turning 30 years old. It was an Tongan birthday party. Some people had on a puletaha. There were alot of food like pigs, horse, fish , And octopus. 

The cake was beautiful it had amazing orange patterns on them. There were also nice stunning white flowers in the middle. There was a little girl in the left corner of the photo she was looking straight into the cake. She was ready to dig in. 

There were about 35 people there. 5 aunties 15 children and 5 uncles and there were other kids but don't have no idea who they are.

But thank you for readying my blog here is my writing of this week :) enjoy. 

Here is also the photo of what we were writing about :).

 

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FIA FIA

 Malo Lelei readers,

Today I'm going to be sharing the schools Fia Fia. So we practiced for about a month our teachers were Miss Cliford and Miss Harris. The girls only learned 2 dances and the boys learned 3 dances. 

When it was time for fia fia night we had to wear pacific clothes some kids had to get some from the office cause they didn't have anything pacific to wear. We had to wear a puletaha its just a top and a skirt you would say in english. 

But here is a photo of what a puletaha is.

So now you know what a puletaha is some puletaha looks like this but some doesn't. We had alot of fun at pacifica we had kids parents and siblings over and also some of the teachers.

We had these necklaces on they were like fake flower around our necks.

I wore a white puletaha you would see me in the front of the video on the sixth line. There were also some pacific food they were called keke and sipi.

But that is what we did for fia fia.

If you would like to watch the video it is right here.

Video Link

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Word of the week!!!1

 

Kia Ora readers,

Today I'm going to be sharing my word of the week. This word of the week is Tempting. If you go to classs blog and click on one childrens blog page you would see they have different words. cause this week our teacher told us that we were allowed to do our own weeks 

but what I learned from tempting is Attractive and appealing. Like a strawberry is delicious and yummy. 

I don't have any more ideas to share about what tempting means but you will find meanings in dictionary online or dictionary books . And also feel free to search on google.

But here is my Word Of The Week!!!.

Thank you for checking out  my word of the week. Please leave a comment and a have nice day :).